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staring at the ceiling,
       the walls crushing in.
       bright light faded
            and
                dark
                     tides
                        begin.

seeping from the hallway,
creeping ever closer...
no use in hiding,
dark forces once chose her.

hear the sound of the blackness,
       scratching on tiles
wishing for light,
       just..
       for..
       a..
       while...

huddled in a corner,
pathetic
and so small;
pretending not the hear
       the dark's     h o l l o w    call.

reaching for her mind,
    tentatively
         gripping.
coldness in that touch,
her conscious thought
                           slip-
                             slip-
                               slipping.

coarsing thru her mind,
the ebb,
  and
the
  flow.
the darkness consuming,
painstakingly
s l  o   w    . . .

Screaming for help,
yet only
         silence
                   remains...
trying again,
but trying
in vain.

feel the darkness -
      touching her skin.
feeling it creep,
                   creeping within.

   consuming all thought,
all power,
all will.
   eyes staring blank now;

deathly.

and still

the darkness won,
and so it would seem...
till she wakes from her dream
with a
       strangled
                 scream.
©2009 ~Ireful
:iconireful:

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one of them nightmares...

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:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose:

An absolutely perfect description of where you go that I am oh so familiar with. An Incredible piece of work!

katti

:blackrose:

--
come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconireful:
thankies... im glad someone understands :hug:

--
I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.
:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose::blackrose:

You are welcome dear, and I am a shoulder you can always count on to listen to you.

love,
katti
:blackrose:

--
come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconireful:
hehe thanks! i might take you up on that offer tho... :hug:

--
I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.
:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose:

It is right here, yours for the taking as needed.

katti
:blackrose:

--
come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconpaulstays:
WOW! I must admit my dear, that was great. I was on the edge of my seat and the word pattern throughout the whole piece, just adds to it PERFECTLY!

--
~Paul~
:iconireful:
thankies :D one of those poems i wrote in record time. you know, when you dont think which word rhymes with what, you just write without giving it any thought...

--
I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.
:iconpaulstays:
yes, I know what you mean. Everything just....flows. That doesn't seem to happen much on my side any more but then again, situations change.

--
~Paul~
:iconireful:
neither on mine. but when it does, i grab it...

--
I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.

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