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I saw her again today, at the corner of the street,
Sitting on a wooden crate, tomatoes at her feet,
A bowl on her lap, full of beads and twine;
“Would you mind it I sit down for a while?”
I watcher her skilled hands, a beautiful neckpiece being made.
Sat down, asked it she would teach me her trade.
She handed me some beads and I lost track of time,
In broken English she told me her life story,
In broken sepedi I told her mine.
We shared laughs and tears while doing peyote stiches;
Moments like these make life worthwhile – it enriches.
I met an extraordinary woman today; im never letting her go.
She gave me something which I lost long ago.
Somewhere between sharing our joys, troubles and pain
She made me feel alive again…
©2007-2010 ~Ireful
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:iconforleafclovgrl:
:dance: Very impressive!! You are a great writer! Could you please check out at least one of my poems and comment? I would love your feedback!… :heart:

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Aww, thank you! :thanks: yeah i'll check it out asap. :)

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I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.
:iconforleafclovgrl:
You're welcome and thanks!!!

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Love is like a four leaf clover: hard to find but lucky to have.

Wrap yourself in a whirl of emotions. Find people who understand what you are going through....[link]
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I LIKE!!! U manage make me see this whole story unfolding with my minds eye! Pure talent! It is so realistic that I'm assuming that most of it, if not all, is based on a true story.. right?

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Thank you! :hug: Yup, all of it is true. Was thinking i should add a preview pic of her to the poem. :D

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I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.
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Hehe, that would bring the poem to life even more, especially to a non-African person like me. haha. But then again, I dunno if that will make one loose the ability to re-create the story in his/her own mind... I mean, the way it is is just perfect... it allows u think about what you are reading, to create it as u want, interpret it as u want... Personally, Id leave it as is :)

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Reading this just feels good.:D

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"Art is Life" :w00t:
"For Yesterday is but a dream and tomorrow is only a vision, live life not dive" ~Kalidasa
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Nice feel+imagery.
:iconireful:
Thanks, i'm glad u like it! :butterflytwo:

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I wander and wander along,
And forever before me gleams
The shining city of song,
In the beautiful land of dreams.
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Nice!!

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"...every artist is a cannibal, every poet is a thief..." U2
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